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[Infernity]

Unavoidable Expectable Turnover by Infernity (Adi Berman)

Everything's so perfect in your simpleminded world
The pixies light is shining in the moon’s brightness
You know it's temporary 'cause all the goodness is vanishing
And for now
Your white wings are softly touching the velvety water
Till it wakes up, and all the dismay turns real

Ice becomes fire
Water's all you desire
But no good is left
It has tasted death
Come on, let me breathe
To keep my heart pounding
Pulsing with the cool breeze
Hell, just don't let me freeze

This light blue morning, doesn't seem to be familiar
Too much lily and the sky is so relaxing
I'll live forever but I feel something too good's happening
All these sounds
Cannot hold on for too long my own sanity
One step closer to infernal eternity

Ice becomes fire
Water's all you desire
But no good is left
It has tasted death
Come on, let me breathe
To keep my heart pounding
Pulsing with the cool breeze
Hell, just don't let me freeze

Too damn good to be real
All is lie, I can feel
At the best it will all go away
The control overtake – the dismay

Black would be the day
And dark shall be the night
When the time will be the best
The wickedness shall wake up of the long deep rest

Ice becomes fire
Water's all you desire
But no good is left
It has tasted death
Come on, let me breathe
To keep my heart pounding
Pulsing with the cool breeze
Hell, just don't let me freeze

Can't imagine it all disappears
Vanishing like nothing, isn't even worth my tears
If it was- I wouldn't cry
Now I know, I seem to die…

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What do you think?
Someday, you shall also hear me singing it )



Yours truthfully
~Infernity

EDIT: DOWNLOAD HERE

Edited by infernity, 15 January 2006 - 11:45 AM.

[Bruce Klein]

"Hell, just don't let me freeze"

interesting.. creative.

thanks for sharing!

[Infernity]

Thanks for the warm reply, Bruce

Yours
~Infernity

Edited by infernity, 04 February 2005 - 09:26 PM.

[eternaltraveler]

Nice song.

You should whip up an MP3 of it and post it here as well (Is that possible?) It would be nice to hear.

[Infernity]

Thanks Elrond,
It is possible, but I don't know how to upload MP3 files over here, only pictures...
I am also very busy lately I will find time to record it sooner or later .

Yours truthfully
~Infernity

[Trias]

"Sometimes silence is best,
Not because there is nothing left to say - -
Bet because some things are too deep for words..."

So is the description for this poem.

'Beautiful', or "profound" are by no means enough for it .........

Adi,

(by the way - in English, Adi = Jewel [thumb])

You've got a lot to give; you've got many more 'jewels' to give us, not just us - the entire world.

" Against the grain,
Against the odds..
I'll rise...
...and I won't trip again "
In Flames / Dawn of a New Day

Yours forever,
-Daniel

[Infernity]

Aww, Daniel that's beautiful!
Thank you, it seem you understood what I felt while writing it.
Very touching is your reply [bl:)] , thanks.......

Yours truthfully
~Infernity
(Y.L.L.I)

[Bruce Klein]

Via the magic of uploading, I've had the pleasure of listening to Infernity's song. Beautiful. I encourage others to take a listen. I will include in the ImmInst Film.

Unavoidable Expectable Turnover by Infernity (Adi Berman)

MP3: (2.7 MG)

WAV: http://www.imminst.o...ges/final_a.wav (30 MG)

[Infernity]

Thank you so much Bruce! This is my honor!
I didn't think it is that good, I actually didn't think it is good, but I guess well like my opinion on my own photos, it is improving with time and analyse.
You do have the permission of my parents too .

Yours forever
~Infernity

[jaydfox]

Bruce, mind converting that to an MP3 to save space and bandwidth (not just for ImmInst, but for members)? Even at 192 kbs, that's still quite a savings, and at 128 or 80 kbs, an even greater savings. 30.5 MB isn't too big a deal for broadband users, as the rate seems to be limited somewhere between my computer at work and the ImmInst server (I'm getting 108 KB/s, or about five minutes). However, for 56K and slower users, a 4MB (or 3 MB, or 2MB) file would be much better.

Infernity, I liked the song very much. It's hard to sing a song of this caliber a capela, so bravo.

I'm wondering, if we include this in the film, would it be possible to add an instrument (guitar or lute, etc.) to one or two of the verses, just for a little variety? Just a thought. Hate to be a critic, I'm not really a good enough musician myself to judge others.

[Infernity]

Thank you Jay!
Some little bird whispered me you are a professional singer! is it true?

Well I have a guitarist, which is better in my opinion on electric guitar (I wonder how would that come out with an electric one), and I gave him the recording yesterday so he will start working on it, maybe it'll be possible to record that too and upload, or I'll simply send Bruce.

Yours
~Infernity

[jaydfox]

Thank you Jay!
Some little bird whispered me you are a professional singer! is it true?

No, strictly amatuer, though I sang tenor in a community chamber choir once, and I've performed solos and in duets, trios, quartets, etc., in various church choirs and concerts. Nothing serious for a few years though, so my voice and pitch are a little rusty at the moment.

[jaydfox]

Like you, I don't think my singing is as good as others tell me it is. Most of the time I think they are just trying to flatter me.

[Bruce Klein]

Thanks, Jay.

MP3: (2.7 MG)

[Infernity]

That's an impoevment- just a playing with the affects... still without the guitar.
If you didn't hear it yet- you better listen to this version.

Yours truthfully
~Infernity

[Infernity]

Wow, I found something pretty cool when I wrote "ice fire" in the Google pictures search engine, and I found this.
Of course in order to make it related to the song, hmm shall look for better photos.



~Infernity

[zoolander]

just sing infernity. Dont sing for others. Sing for yourself. It's a form of expression.
You wrote the song from your heart didn't you? Then sing it from your heart. Share what you feel.

I can tell that you are young by the sound of your voice. Is this true? You have a beautiful angelic voice.

I would love to write a melody to your song. Im a lead vocalist for a melodic punk band though. I think the song you wrote with a melodic punk feel would be very evenescence.

I have a low voice and if I did backing vocals we would compliment each other well. We could called the project "Never senescense" instead of Evenescence. hehehehe

amphetish.info

have a listen to some of our older Mp3's. I know the other band members would love to have a play around with the song. With your approval of course.

You must do one thing though.....copyright the song ASAP! Alot of people would steal those lyrics and your style in the snap of a finger.

Find your confidence Infernity.

Thank you for the song. It was quite touching. Dark. Sweet. A tad haunting. And so angelic.

[Infernity]

just sing infernity. Dont sing for others. Sing for yourself. It's a form of expression.

Yeah, I know, I dislike people who sing song whom they didn't write. I won't cooperate to such...

You wrote the song from your heart didn't you? Then sing it from your heart. Share what you feel

Oh yes, from the heart. I was amazed to have a short while after this expected future, only after several events I realized what every single element in this means. There was a time where I couldn't say the words, only listen and cry...

Don't worry, things came out OK after a long affair.

Gee, let it not happen again, The Unavoidable Expectable Turnover.

I can tell that you are young by the sound of your voice. Is this true?

Yes, I suppose I am young, heh I'm 14.

You have a beautiful angelic voice.

Thanks [bl:)] that's sweet.

I would love to write a melody to your song. Im a lead vocalist for a melodic punk band though. I think the song you wrote with a melodic punk feel would be very evenescence

Evanescence style is good enough heh.
I love metal music actually, I wonder if it could come out [tung] . I suppose it can, I have the electric guitar, drums and everything fitting in my head, it's just I can write it, I don't know how...
I don't think punk would feet here, but probably some elegant metal or something... hmm.
But well thank you very much! I actually always wanted to have a metal band, would you change style to the deeper music called Metal?

I have a low voice and if I did backing vocals we would compliment each other well. We could called the project "Never senescense" instead of Evenescence. hehehehe

Lol, "Never senescense" [lol] ...

have a listen to some of our older Mp3's. I know the other band members would love to have a play around with the song. With your approval of course.

Hmm, well I think we should speak in vocal chat first, um, do you have skype?
I'll tell you were I have what in my head. I really appreciate it [bl:)]
Thanks. Don't work it out till then please though...

You must do one thing though.....copyright the song ASAP! A lot of people would steal those lyrics and your style in the snap of a finger.

Find your confidence Infernity.

How can I copyright it...? [huh]

Thank you for the song. It was quite touching. Dark. Sweet. A tad haunting. And so angelic.

No, thank YOU for listening and letting it get you.
Thank you very much for everything!

Yours truthfully
~Infernity

[zoolander]

Ive sent you a PM about copyright. Dont stop what you are doing Infernity and dont force it either.

I find it hard to believe that you are so young. Its amazing. I have read some of your posts and you seem more mature than most your age.

I believe that you have a collective coonsciousness and you my friend must have had some pretty wise ancestors that passed theirs onto you.

WOW

Edited by zoolander, 27 June 2005 - 12:07 AM.

[Infernity]

Ive sent you a PM about copyright. Dont stop what you are doing Infernity and dont force it either.

Yeah, I'll check, and will take that tip

I find it hard to believe that you are so young. Its amazing. I have read some of your posts and you seem more mature than most your age.

[bl:)]
Thanks I love it when people say it to me ^ ^ .

I believe that you have a collective coonsciousness and you my friend must have had some pretty wise ancestors that passed theirs onto you.

WOW

Well heh thanks again my friend, I'm really flattered you know [sfty] ...

Yours truthfully
~Infernity

[Infernity]

Ah, Graeme, by the way, I think this song can be proved as mine since it will be in the rolling credit in the film I think, pretty much solid evidence [bl:)]

Yours truthfully
~Infernity

[Bruce Klein]

Yes... most defiantly your song will be included in at least the credits.

[Infernity]

Thanks bro,
Then I suppose I don't have to worry about copyright over here should I?

Your forever
~Infernity

[Bruce Klein]

Yep... as creator and artist, you'll retain copyright to your work.

[eternaltraveler]

you really do have an amazing voice.

[Infernity]

Thank you Justin, how sweet [bl:)]
HM : >

Yours truthfully
~Infernity

Edited by infernity, 04 August 2005 - 04:24 PM.

[Infernity]

I was still 13 when I recorded this.... and after 8 years, I'm finally recording it again, only this time, it will be as perfect as I had it in mind when I wrote it, with all the instruments and everything.


It will be done within the coming month

[Infernity]

My old friends... if you are still around, you might want to hear the song's professional remake, with its new name Vanishing