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[Droplet]

Well done, jdkasinsky.

[jdgauchat]

Congratulations jdkasinsky!
It is a nice ad. Your comment on the usage of the prize money is also nice.
But would you consider a suggestion?
Before finalising, I request you to reconsider the word WILL in you ad.
May be a WOULD ? Or something else to inject an element of hope?
The word WILL gets me scurrying for hope elsewhere. Anyway, it makes an impact!
A change if considered, could give a great touch to this longecity.org ad.

Thanks, man. I've sent the final design to Caliban the other day, but I have the originals. If the guys like your suggestion and decide to make the change I'll do it right away. I used that expression because the hope was in the plant in the middle of the image and the sentence "support life extension". The idea was to show what is going to happen if we don't do anything, and put life extension as the only hope.

I already got my membership, yeah!

JD

Edited by jdkasinsky, 21 February 2013 - 08:18 PM.